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Friday 25 October 2013

The dog who survived

WALT : write a narrative

One day at 3:08 pm there was a fire. The fire was in Mission bay. No one was home only a dog. The mum was gone to pick up her kids from school and the dad was at work.

The mum didn't remember to turn off the stove before she went to pick her kids up. It made the house catch on fire. The dog could smell the fire burning. The dog was upstairs in the house. The neighbors called the fire department.

The firefighters were on there way with no time to waiste. By the time they had got there the dog had jumped out the upstairs window and took off. No one saw the dog run so they put out the fire and went in the house and called the dog. “ nope no dog here” said the firefighter. “ well thanks anyway” the neighbors said. When the family got home the house was a extreme mess and the down stairs was all burnt. The neighbors ran over to tell t the family the vital news. “ wheres the dog though “ ? asked one of the kids , “ i don’t know ? “ said the neighbor.

Then came the dog running in dazzling to see that his family was home. “ mum he's here “ said the daughter. Luckily for the family they could afford to get there home fixed and the stuff replaced because it only burnt in the kitchen.

 

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