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Saturday 28 September 2013

My dads raw fish

Walt: retell the story


The title of this story is My dad’s raw fish. This story shows you how the author and his family make their raw fish.


Mata is the author of this story . At first Mata  scales the fish and cleans it all up but he makes his younger brothers do it he says because their younger.


Next they have prepared all the stuff they need for making their yummy raw fish they cut the fishes head and cook it in another pot with coconut cream. is picking the limes of the tree. Mata says that his mum doesn't like him picking the limes of the tree but his dad says as long as your hands are clean you can pick them but his mum has a different thought about him picking those limes.


When they have done all of that , they prepare it and enjoy eating it. Normally his older brother David takes the last piece. But before he takes it you will find Mata eyeing the last raw fish even though he is full to the point where his stomach can explode.



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